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For this board, I started with with the original text. But once set the context, I can add a few words. any remaining, at best, faithful to the book. I hope you enjoy it.
Pour cette planche, j'ai démarré avec avec texte original. Mais, une fois le contexte placé, je vais pouvoir rajouter quelques paroles. toute en restant, au mieux , fidèle à l'ouvrage.J'espère que ça vous plaira.
Watercolor, A4
Tolkien (c) silmarillion
Comics by Daswhox.
Pour cette planche, j'ai démarré avec avec texte original. Mais, une fois le contexte placé, je vais pouvoir rajouter quelques paroles. toute en restant, au mieux , fidèle à l'ouvrage.J'espère que ça vous plaira.
Watercolor, A4
Tolkien (c) silmarillion
Comics by Daswhox.
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1000x1345px 2.47 MB
© 2013 - 2024 Daswhox
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As for character design, the swirly faceless Illuvitar with the two big sleeved hands gives a sort of creator vibe, the hands of a god at work composing. The gesture in panel three strongly implies his leadership over the choir.
As well as the feathers are drawn, my one real criticism is that feathery head garb and slender costumes are bit too common in Elf related fantasy art and lore. Also, I was thinking the dialog boxes could use a border of some kind, maybe even one that looks a little like an illuminated manuscript.
Overall it's excellent.